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You don't have to take my advice if you don't want too: everything I said is my opinion, and this is your story. I - as a reader - found ...

let's debate this, in good sport: i think it's unfair to impose your standards of how a person should behave on the story. could it not be possible for joy ...

Joy was in love with him. Blake, with his fair blonde hair and broad shoulders. Blake, the smart sensitive boy who read Kerouac and listened to The Flaming Lips. Yes, ...

hey you pretty little blonde with transparent makeup broken eyeliner, broken eyes that say maybe you’ve seen it all maybe it really isn’t all it’s cracked up to be this ...

edit 12/21 - cut "The knife is in his hand." He is crying. Grown men don’t cry but certainly he realizes this as tears stream down his face, and he ...

It’s Friday night and I’m bored out of my skull. I call my friend Joe to see if maybe he wants to smoke a joint. Joe, having returned from an ...

One of the best albums of the year. I highly recommend you purchase this next Tuesday.

We're left unclear about character motivations and that makes them less likeable and/or relatable. This is a decent start but as it stands doesn't leave much of an impact.

hey man i hate dashboard confessional and bright eyes as much as the next guy but that doesn't mean i'm throwing around "emo" as a derogatory term and poking fun ...

I’m sick of feeling heartbroken when I shouldn’t be when I have no right to be when I haven’t had a girlfriend in two years and I forget what it ...

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The frankness of the piece is refreshing. However, Marley comes off as a little one-dimensional in my opinion. I'd be interested in more why and less what.

Can't say I really understood it but the feeling is there.

Good flow. But it didn't cut as deeply as it probably could have.

This is great. Dark, eloquent.